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English 1b3 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Incorrect Sentence?

It's a five step process, with which, if you take time will come really naturally.





Shouldn't there be no 'with' in the above sentence?





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English 1b3 Shouldn't there be no 'with' in the above sentence? True. And no comma after "process", and a comma after "time".

  • English 1b3 Shouldn't there be no 'with' in the above sentence?
  • True.
  • And no comma after "process", and a comma after "time".
  • CJ Edit: Just saw Mr Wordy's response.
  • I forgot to mention the hyphen.
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English 1b3Shouldn't there be no 'with' in the above sentence?
True. And no comma after "process", and a comma after "time".

CJ

Edit: Just saw Mr Wordy's response. I forgot to mention the hyphen.
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It seems a horrible sentence. Yes, let's get rid of "with", fiddle with the commas, add a hyphen, and see what it looks like:

It's a five-step process which, if you take time, will come really naturally.
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I feel that it should be ,It's a five step process,which will come really naturally if youo take time . Just my opinion ,for your reference.

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