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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
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Inconvenient custom

0 00Would you please point out my errors. Thank you.00I got gift return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their school start. I gave them cash because they want to buy anything they want, and I received just half the price of department store coupon and some sweet. This might sounds ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people tale it rude if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received. I hate this custom especially for the wedding. At wedding ceremony, you paid not a small amount of money and receive tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant. In my closet, there are lots of wedding gift returns even with just low numbers of wedding ceremony. 00Things getting changed to more simply and cost effectively little by little. Sometimes I feel funny because I feel you are rude because you are complaining you does not receive anything just because you give unnecessary things to someone. 0-
  

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02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 01span 02br 02br 02span 01span 00I 01u 00got gift02u 00 return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their 01u 00school start02u 00. I gave them cash because 01u 00they want to buy anything they want02u 00, and I received just half the price 01u 00of department02u 00 store coupon and some 01u 00sweet02u 00. This 01u 00might sounds02u 00 ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people 01u 00tale it rude02u 00 if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received.

  • 02br 01i 00I have underlined some problem areas:02i 01span 02br 02br 02span 01span 00I 01u 00got gift02u 00 return for the cash gift to my nephew and niece for their 01u 00school start02u 00.
  • I gave them cash because 01u 00they want to buy anything they want02u 00, and I received just half the price 01u 00of department02u 00 store coupon and some 01u 00sweet02u 00.
  • This 01u 00might sounds02u 00 ridiculous and inconvenient, but some people 01u 00tale it rude02u 00 if you do not pay back half the price of the gift you received.
  • I hate this 01u 00custom especially02u 00 for 01u 00the wedding02u 00.
  • 01u 00At wedding02u 00 ceremony, you 01u 00paid02u 00 not a small amount of money and receive 01u 00tons of return mostly heavy and unpleasant02u 00.
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