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Navitasan Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Including playing the guitar

Is this sentence correct:
1-He performed the song, including playing the guitar.

He sang it and played the guitar. I don't know one could tell if he was accompanied by other musicians or not.

Gratefully,
Navi.
  

Top answer

It's not a good sentence: the part after the comma does not connect properly with the first part. It doesn't say one way or the other whether he was accompanied by other musicians. One would assume that he was the main or only performer.

  • It's not a good sentence: the part after the comma does not connect properly with the first part.
  • It doesn't say one way or the other whether he was accompanied by other musicians.
  • One would assume that he was the main or only performer.
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It's not a good sentence: the part after the comma does not connect properly with the first part.

It doesn't say one way or the other whether he was accompanied by other musicians. One would assume that he was the main or only performer.

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