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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

including Florida

Could you please tell me if the usage of "in" in the sentence 1 is correct? Is the sentence 2 better? 1) We manage more than 200 stores all over the the United States in Florida, California, Alabama,Texas, Hawaii, and more. 2) We manage more than 200 stores all over the the United States, including Florida, California, Alabama, Texas, Hawaii, and more.
  

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If you use including , you don't need and more . I think the one with including (and without and more ) is better. We manage more than 200 stores all over the the United States, including Florida, California, Alabama, Texas, and Hawaii.

— CalifJim

  • If you use including , you don't need and more .
  • I think the one with including (and without and more ) is better.
  • We manage more than 200 stores all over the the United States, including Florida, California, Alabama, Texas, and Hawaii.
  • CJ
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If you use including, you don't need and more.

I think the one with including (and without and more) is better.

We manage more than 200 stores all over the the United States, including Florida, California, Alabama, Texas, and Hawaii.

CJ
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Thank very much for your correction and advice.Emotion: embarrassed
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