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Ben9108 Posted 20 years ago
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including & submitted

we revise the rectification cost for gondola incident including the replacementcost of aluminium window submitted by Messrs.YKK for your retention.


Can use included and submitting to replace the above format?
  

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No. You can't use "included the replacement cost". It has to be "including the replacement cost".

  • No.
  • You can't use "included the replacement cost".
  • It has to be "including the replacement cost".
  • Likewise, you can't use "submitting by".
  • It has to be "submitted by".
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No. You can't use "included the replacement cost". It has to be "including the replacement cost".
Likewise, you can't use "submitting by". It has to be "submitted by".

Please be advised, also, that the sentence as a whole is difficult to understand.
"revise the rectification cost" makes no sense to me, nor does "for your retention".

CJ

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