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Moguwai007 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Includes
For a description of a hotel room, is this the correct way to use "Includes" ?
A simple and economical room, ideal for business or single travelers. Includes comfortable bed with duvet, and complimentary high-speed internet access.
A simple and economical room, ideal for business or single travelers. Includes comfortable bed with duvet, and complimentary high-speed internet access.
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It sounds just a bit odd. travelers, with comfortable..... * It isn't really a sentence, as there are no verbs.
- It sounds just a bit odd.
- travelers, with comfortable.....
- * It isn't really a sentence, as there are no verbs.
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It sounds just a bit odd. I would replace 'includes' with 'with' and combine the two parts into one "sentence" * :
...travelers, with comfortable.....
* It isn't really a sentence, as there are no verbs.
...travelers, with comfortable.....
* It isn't really a sentence, as there are no verbs.
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