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PreciousJones Posted 16 years ago
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Hi,

Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure, including the most up to date product styles, models and information.

Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure includes the most up to date product styles, models and information.

Which sentence is grammatically perfect and most natural?

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First of all, there are some redressings. PreciousJones Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure including the most up to date product styles, models and information. PreciousJones Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure that/which includes the most up to date product styles, models and information.

— Fandorin

  • First of all, there are some redressings.
  • PreciousJones Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure including the most up to date product styles, models and information.
  • PreciousJones Attached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure that/which includes the most up to date product styles, models and information.
  • I'm wondering whether you send just two pages of the entire brochure or the brochure consists of two pages.
  • If you're planning to say it business way, I would say that: I would like to send you two pages {think whether it is true as I stated above} of our brand new brochure which covers in detail the list of product styles and models and provides all necessary information.
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First of all, there are some redressings.
PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure including the most up to date product styles, models and information.
PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure that/which includes the most up to date product styles, models and informatio
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FandorinFirst of all, there are some redressings.
PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure including the most up to date product styles, models and information.
PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure that/which includes the most up to date product sty
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How about this?

Please find attached two pages of our latest brochure which illustrate the most up to date product styles and models, and provide all necessary information.
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PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure including the most up to date product styles, models and information.
This will do.
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PreciousJonesAttached you'll find two pages out of our newest brochure, including the most up to date product styles, models and information.


Yes, this will do. But I would use hyphens (i.e. up-to-date).
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