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GUGGI Posted 14 years ago
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"The final pattern outcome includes the bottom which is formed by designed lines and the figural hand sketch which is essential and fine, and conveys a fresh style of home decoration design."
I want to describe this outcome has 1.the bottom 2,hand sketch
But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly understood. Could you please offer me some rewriting? THX
I want to describe this outcome has 1.the bottom 2,hand sketch
But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly understood. Could you please offer me some rewriting? THX
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the bottom 2,hand sketch But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly understood. Could you please offer me some rewriting? You are trying to say too much in one sentence.
- the bottom 2,hand sketch But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly understood.
- Could you please offer me some rewriting?
- You are trying to say too much in one sentence.
- I suggest this.
- "The final pattern outcome includes two parts.
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Hi,
"The final pattern outcome includes the bottom which is formed by designed lines and the figural hand sketch which is essential and fine, and conveys a fresh style of home decoration design."
I want to describe this outcome has 1.the bottom 2,hand sketch
But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly under
"The final pattern outcome includes the bottom which is formed by designed lines and the figural hand sketch which is essential and fine, and conveys a fresh style of home decoration design."
I want to describe this outcome has 1.the bottom 2,hand sketch
But I found there are too many "and", so it's somewhat not easy to be clearly under
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