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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
incident report letter
Please help me with this letter. This is my first time writing an incident report so im not sure if my format is correct. thanks in advance & Godbless..
ma'am Lannie,
This account is regarding the incident that happened last January 9, 2016
I am the morning charge nurse. when this incident occured, ms.ruby and mr. kevs was my co nurses and mr muya was our nursing attendant. at around 11:30 am after we transferred all postoperative patient we asked mr. muya to deliver the soiled linens to the linen department. At 1:45pm ms.ruby saw linens was not delivered so that we endorsed it to the afternoon shift nurse ms. angel and nursing attendant mr vic. but they also failed to do it because mr.vic said that linen department is already close at that time.
sincerly chloe..
ma'am Lannie,
This account is regarding the incident that happened last January 9, 2016
I am the morning charge nurse. when this incident occured, ms.ruby and mr. kevs was my co nurses and mr muya was our nursing attendant. at around 11:30 am after we transferred all postoperative patient we asked mr. muya to deliver the soiled linens to the linen department. At 1:45pm ms.ruby saw linens was not delivered so that we endorsed it to the afternoon shift nurse ms. angel and nursing attendant mr vic. but they also failed to do it because mr.vic said that linen department is already close at that time.
sincerly chloe..
Top answer
Proper names are capitalized. M r. M uya, M s.
- Proper names are capitalized.
- M r.
- M uya, M s.
- R uby.
- Sentences begin with a capital letter.
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Proper names are capitalized.
Mr. Muya, Ms. Ruby.
Sentences begin with a capital letter.
At around 11:30 am
You have many subject-verb agreement issues. Plural subjects get plural verbs.
A and B were...
... linens were
Please make these changes, and then we can fix the other grammatical errors.
Mr. Muya, Ms. Ruby.
Sentences begin with a capital letter.
At around 11:30 am
You have many subject-verb agreement issues. Plural subjects get plural verbs.
A and B were...
... linens were
Please make these changes, and then we can fix the other grammatical errors.
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This account is regarding the incident that happened last January 9, 2016.
I am the morning charge nurse. When this incident occured, Ms.Rubs and Mr.Kevs were my co nurses and Mr. Muya was our nursing attendant. At around 11:30 am after we transferred all postoperative patient we asked Mr.Muya to deliver the soiled linens to the linen department. At 1:45pm Ms.Ruby saw linens were not delivered
I am the morning charge nurse. When this incident occured, Ms.Rubs and Mr.Kevs were my co nurses and Mr. Muya was our nursing attendant. At around 11:30 am after we transferred all postoperative patient we asked Mr.Muya to deliver the soiled linens to the linen department. At 1:45pm Ms.Ruby saw linens were not delivered
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Oh that is so much better!!!
This account is regarding the incident that happened last January 9, 2016.
I am the morning charge nurse. When this incident occured, Ms. Ruby and Mr. Kevs were my co-nurses and Mr. Muya was our nursing attendant. At around 11:30 am after we transferred all post-operative patients, we asked Mr. Muya to deliver the soiled linens to the
This account is regarding the incident that happened last January 9, 2016.
I am the morning charge nurse. When this incident occured, Ms. Ruby and Mr. Kevs were my co-nurses and Mr. Muya was our nursing attendant. At around 11:30 am after we transferred all post-operative patients, we asked Mr. Muya to deliver the soiled linens to the
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