Is the underlined "in" correctly placed? Or should I use "on" instead? Maybe you can spot other mistakes as well?
This candy is fat-free and low in calories; therefore people who care about a beautiful figure do not have to worry that they will gain weight if they will treat themselves with a little bit of candy. Much appreciated!
Top answer
In is fine. Low + on means to be near the end of a supply ( low on gas/food/funds ). I would use a comma after therefore .
— RandomGuy
In is fine.
Low + on means to be near the end of a supply ( low on gas/food/funds ).
I would use a comma after therefore .
The second will is incorrect and should be deleted.
Treat themselves to is more idiomatic.
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