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Jackson6612 Posted 17 years ago
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In today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from

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In today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from and to decide with which institution he should do business with. So the top priority of any business should be to keep the customer regular so that he doesn't go for some other institution. This goal can be achived through good public dealing and serving the customer on personal basis.
  

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In today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from when deciding with which company he should do business with. ] so that he doesn't go for some other institution [seems unecessary: "loyal" already means this]. This goal can be achieved through good public relations and personal customer service .

  • In today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from when deciding with which company he should do business with.
  • ] so that he doesn't go for some other institution [seems unecessary: "loyal" already means this].
  • This goal can be achieved through good public relations and personal customer service .
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In today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from when deciding with which company he should do business with. So the top priority of any business should be to keep the customer loyal [keeping a customer "regular" has an unfortunate double meaning to do with constipation!] so that he doesn't go for some other institution [seems u
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Mr WordyIn today's commercial world a customer has a lot of options to choose from when deciding with which company he should do business with. So the top priority of any business should be to keep the customer loyal [keeping a customer "regular" has an unfortunate double meaning to d
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Jackson6612Yes, you are correct regualr does have a double meaning. But almost every word has so many different meanings. So wouldn't the context exaplain it to the reader in what sense regular or some other word is used?

Fear not. You can almost always use the word "regular" in its normal sense without risking raising sniggers. It was just

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