In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons

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Hello. Are the following grammatically correct?

"Kids, I want confess something too. In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons. However, only the brave try to amend these errors. I must confess the truth. Your teacher made a mistake, but I was a jerk with her. But I am not the type of nerd that you think. I'm a completely different type of jerk.. This was a shy boy for whom everybody had affection because he was a good person and they saw him as fragile..

The boy who insists over and over again, but when he was angry he sought revenge

However, He looks for and he does anything but show love for that special girl. I was too proud even to admit my mistakes. After your teacher talked to me, the ghosts who had been part of my life for years, which are usually the worst ghosts that we can face, left forever and a sense of peace in my soul was installed. You must feel proud of your teacher."

Thanks.

AlpheccaStars · Accepted Answer

Kids, I want confess something too. In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons. However, only the brave try to amend these errors. I must confess the truth. Your teacher made a mistake, but I was a jerk with her. But I am not the type of nerd that you think. I'm a completely different type of jerk.. (The next sentence does not logically flow from here.) This was a shy boy for whom everybody had affection because he was a good person and they saw him as fragile..

The boy who insists over and over again, but when he was angry he sought revenge (fragment, incomplete)

However, He looks for and he does anything but show love for that special girl. I was too proud even to admit my mistakes. After your teacher talked to me, the ghosts who had been part of my life for years, which are usually the worst ghosts that we can face, left forever and a sense of peace in my soul was installed. You must feel proud of your teacher."

Teechr · Answer

Kids, I want to confess something too. In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons. However, only the brave try to amend these errors. I must confess the truth. Your teacher made a mistake, but I was a jerk with her. But I am not the type of nerd that you think. I'm a completely different type of jerk. This was a shy boy for whom everybody had affection because he was a good person and they saw him as fragile. [ I don't see the connection here.]

The boy who insists over and over again, but when he was angry he sought revenge
[ I don't understand that.]

However, He looks for and he does anything but show love for that special girl. [ Rephrase that; it's unclear.] I was too proud even to admit my mistakes. After your teacher talked to me, the ghosts who had been part of my life for years, which are usually the worst ghosts that we can face, left forever, and I felt a sense of peace in my soul. ~~was installed.~~ You must [ By "must", do you mean "I suppose you" or "you should?"] feel proud of your teacher.

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Nikitus · Answer

Dear AlpheccaStars and teechr: First of all, thanks for your time and help.

Kids, I want to confess something too. In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons. However, only the brave try to amend these errors. I must confess the truth. Your teacher made a mistake, but I was a jerk with her. But I am not the type of nerd that you think. I'm a completely different type of jerk. I was a shy boy for whom everybody had affection because he was a good-hearted person and they saw him as fragile.

I want to say, that he is confessing that he was not the guy who was mean with woman. He was the quiet guy who everybody had affection.

The boy who insists over and over again invinting one girl to go out, but after the girl rejected him, he was angry he sought revenge.

He was a quiet guy who had a big crush on a girl. After she rejected him, he wanted revenge.

Although he likes her, he made many stupid things that can not be considered acts of love.

I was too proud even to admit my mistakes. After your teacher talked to me, the ghosts who had been part of my life for years, which are usually the worst ghosts that we can face, left forever, and I felt a sense of peace in my soul. You should feel proud of your teacher.

Thanks!

AlpheccaStars · Answer

Kids, I want to confess something too. In this life, we all make mistakes, for different reasons. However, only the brave try to amend these errors. I must confess the truth. Your teacher made a mistake, but I was a jerk with her. But I am not the type of nerd that you think I am. I'm a completely different type of jerk. I am a quiet, shy boy who everybody likes. They see me as a fragile, good-hearted person.

It is bad form to switch from first person to third person.

NikitusThe boy who insists over and over again invinting one girl to go out, but after the girl rejected him, he was angry he sought revenge.

It is not acceptable to ask your teacher to go on a romantic date with you. She was right to reject your advances.

Nikitus · Answer

Dear AlpheccaStars:

First of all, thanks again for your help.

The person who is talking, is Kevin, is 35 years old. He was remebering his "story" with Kelly, when they had around 17 years old. (Kevin was not student of Kelly. They have the same age.)

Thanks!

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