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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
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In the passenger seat...

In the passenger seat, the little boy had his attention out the side window, gazing at a deer crossing a field.

Anything you want to point out about this or is it good?

  

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It is good apart from the phrasing "had his attention out the side window".

  • It is good apart from the phrasing "had his attention out the side window".
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It is good apart from the phrasing "had his attention out the side window".

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