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Võ Đăng Khoa Posted 6 years ago
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In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or use animals in products like clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is stated that the utilization of animals for food, clothes or medicine is not essential anymore in our society today. I completely agree with this viewpoint as the bio-diversity needs to be preserved and thanks to the science development, people can create products by using industrial material instead.


First, By stop hunting animals particularly wildlife ones, the bio-diversity is likely to be balanced. Since a considerable number of animals all over the world has been decreasing everyday by many illegal hunting activities, people should not make use of animals anymore. Furthermore, as the demands for products from animals rises, the disappearing of animals will continue to happen. For example, there are only 20 Red cranes in the world listed in Red List of the Worldwide Animals Organization due to uncontrolled hunting of people. If animals are still being utilized for humans purposes, they will soon become extinct leading to the endangered bio-diversity


Second, the advance technology in the industry could assist people in producing such quality products. This is because artificial products could be made just by synthetic materials but still be able to resemble products made from animals. For instance, nowadays those fox fur jackets are not created from fox anymore since clothes companies can make use of chemical substances combing with either cotton or plastic to create such gorgeous outfits without using animal fur.Therefore, by using these artificial materials instead, people can joint hands to prevent many animals from being extinct as well as preserving the wildlife.


In conclusion, the bio-environment needs to be protected and people should take advantage of those artificial materials instead of animal’s organs and body.

  

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Please do not put the essay instructions in the "Subject" line.
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Subject: Please review my IELTS essay

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Topic: In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or use animals in products like clothes or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is stated that the using utilization of animals for food, clothes or medicine is not essential anymore in our society today. I completely agree with this viewpoint as the bio-diversity needs to be preserved (I do not understand your point. We have cattle for beef an

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