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Grape apple 903 Posted 5 years ago
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: In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays in some parts of the world youth find themselves with very little leisure time. As a result, they are under more pressure than ever before. There are various reasons leading to this issue and some possible solutions which can help so solve it.

To begin with, the reason youngsters don’t have idle time is to make enough money for colleges. Except the tuition fee, they need funds for books, equipments for classes, bus fee, which leads to doing a part-time job. Also parents’ high expectations, the competition between students are the main problems, that stresses young people. To ensure successful career they are expected to take additional courses in the evenings. However, adults don’t realize that by taking their spare time they are putting the younger generation under constraint. In addition, after graduating a high school, adolescents compete for a university with each other. To enroll victoriously youth are in need of studying since institutes only accept applicants with a higher grade.

Support from government and awareness of parents would be the best solutions. To begin with, there should be more institutes meeting the expectation from the masses. As a result, youngsters could have various choices of universities and it could reduce the rivalry level among the peers. Furthermore, government should grant more scholarships or more irrevocable help. High schoolers need an option to freely choose their subjects that concentrate on their chosen profession. For instance, a kid8 who is expecting to become an engineer, doesn’t need to study chemistry or biology in a senior high school. Parents should cheer on their children instead forcing them to study, also should take note their actions can put pressure on them.

To sum it up, the numerous causes youth are under pressure have their very own solutions. It is better to have more spare time to prevent from coercion, negative emotions such as depression and anxiety.

  

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