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In some countries, more and more adults are cotinuting to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweighed the disadvantages?

It is true that in several nations, an increasing number of adults are still staying with their family even after the finished education and had a job. Despite some oblivious advantages of this trend, I would argue that these are outweighed by the disadvantages.
On one the hand, there are two major positive effects of the development in question. Firstly, the cost of living has more expensive so more young people decide to continue to live with their parents. This help them to reduce the accommodation fee and other fees. For example a lot of adults in Ho Chi Mind city stay with their family because they do not have enough income to pay living cost. Secondly, elderly people may no longer have the feeling of isolation and loneliness when they can live with their children, leading to improve their spiritual life.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than the benefits. One reason for this view is that the generation gap caused by different life and opinions's two generation may rise to some troubles. For instance, elderly member tend to go tho bed early and like quite, while young ones may make a noise when coming home late or staying up late at home. Another reason is that children tend to depend on their parents for everything, ranging from doing housework to earning and paying a living cost. As a result, it may be hard for them to be more mature enough to stand on their own feet and take care of their own future family.

In conclusion, it seems to me that the negative effects of this development are more serious than the positive effects

  
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