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Selecter Posted 19 years ago

In slavery of love

0 This was one of my why-not-to-try poems. Please feel free to say anything you'd like.02br
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01i00 My world, my soul, my heart, my throne02br
00 What else someone would wish pretend upon?02br
00 A slave fulfilling master's every whim02br
00 Shall sacrifice his thirst for him02br
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00 To wait till master wants to drink02br
00 To hasten steps if Signors even think02br
00 All sorts of odds and ends to pick02br
00 What else someone would wish to think?02br
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00 Devoted servant stands for lord02br
00 And dedicates his life to him02br
00 But ruthless finger points to fold02br
00 Existence, struggle, pile and mould...02br
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00 Ex-slave makes effort not to die02br
00 Not to decay from own sorrow02br
00 And after years he stands on feet02br
00 To face the new life of tomorrow02br
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00 His wounds were not completely cured02br
00 The time he spent was blank and vain02br
00 Her waist embraced and weird kiss02br
00 Have torn his wounds to bleed with pain02i
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