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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

In sentence examples like this, which type of phrasing should I use?

1. Using a dragonlance, Laurana mortally wounded Beryllinthranox, who fell heavily to the ground and collapsed the elves’ underground evacuation tunnels, (which caused/causing) the total destruction of the city.

2. After a brutal battle that destroyed the city, the Blue Wing was defeated by the Solamnic forces and Kitiara was killed, (which left/leaving) Khellendros without a rider once more.
  

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Using a dragonlance, Laurana mortally wounded Beryllinthranox, who fell heavily to the ground and collapsed the elves’ underground evacuation tunnels and causing the total destruction of the city. After a brutal battle that destroyed the city, the Blue Wing was defeated by the Solamnic forces. Kitiara was killed, leaving Khellendros riderless once more.

— Mister Micawber

  • Using a dragonlance, Laurana mortally wounded Beryllinthranox, who fell heavily to the ground and collapsed the elves’ underground evacuation tunnels and causing the total destruction of the city.
  • After a brutal battle that destroyed the city, the Blue Wing was defeated by the Solamnic forces.
  • Kitiara was killed, leaving Khellendros riderless once more.
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Using a dragonlance, Laurana mortally wounded Beryllinthranox, who fell heavily to the ground and collapsed the elves’ underground evacuation tunnels and causing the total destruction of the city.

After a brutal battle that destroyed the city, the Blue Wing was defeated by the Solamnic forces. Kitiara was killed, leaving Khellendros riderless once mo
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