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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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In passages such as this should I put that middle information in quotes or parenthses?
Crysania had been accompanied from Solace by Tasslehoff and Caramon (who had become a depressed and drunken shell of his former self since he was no longer needed by Raistlin and had no sense of his own worth), and the pair carried her to the Tower, where a meeting of the Conclave was convened to decide her fate.
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Suggestion: consider rewording the part within parentheses at the end, in a separate sentence. Remember: you don't need to get all relevant information about a particular topic in a single sentence.
- Suggestion: consider rewording the part within parentheses at the end, in a separate sentence.
- Remember: you don't need to get all relevant information about a particular topic in a single sentence.
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Suggestion: consider rewording the part within parentheses at the end, in a separate sentence. Remember: you don't need to get all relevant information about a particular topic in a single sentence.
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