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Louis14 Posted 19 years ago
In Love
Your vague memory echoes in the distance
it spill over my existance
the circustance that brought us some time in the past
each of us come from different paths
it seem like i knew you forever
as long as i could remember
there are no words to describe
the sentiment that i feel inside
is it empathy ? or am i just moody?
are you share the same sentiment?
or am i just the only one ?....
it spill over my existance
the circustance that brought us some time in the past
each of us come from different paths
it seem like i knew you forever
as long as i could remember
there are no words to describe
the sentiment that i feel inside
is it empathy ? or am i just moody?
are you share the same sentiment?
or am i just the only one ?....
Top answer
Is the lover gone forever? If not, 'vague' and 'in the distance' are wrong word choices. In fact, you need to get rid of all the past tense references and bring your poem into Now.
- Is the lover gone forever?
- If not, 'vague' and 'in the distance' are wrong word choices.
- In fact, you need to get rid of all the past tense references and bring your poem into Now.
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Is the lover gone forever? If not, 'vague' and 'in the distance' are wrong word choices. In fact, you need to get rid of all the past tense references and bring your poem into Now.
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