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User_gary Posted 18 years ago
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in faith of you, believing you, in belief of you

You told me that the bank, which is a long way from my place, is open today. In belief of your words, I'm going to go there to deposit now. If I realise that the bank is holiday after I go there, I will beat you up.

In belief of you, I'm leaving to USA. You must bring up my son like a prince.

Believing you, I'm leaving this job. You must help me to get job in your company.

In faith of you, I'm leaving this job. You must take me that job.

Please correct my sentences.
  

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They are all pretty bad, Gary. Here's the best I can do: You told me that the bank is open today. I believe you, so I'm going to go there to make a deposit now, although it's a long way from my place .

  • They are all pretty bad, Gary.
  • Here's the best I can do: You told me that the bank is open today.
  • I believe you, so I'm going to go there to make a deposit now, although it's a long way from my place .
  • If it turns out to be a bank holiday, I'll beat you up.
  • I believe you, so I'm leaving for the USA.
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They are all pretty bad, Gary. Here's the best I can do:

You told me that the bank is open today. I believe you, so I'm going to go there to make a deposit now, although it's a long way from my place . If it turns out to be a bank holiday, I'll beat you up.

I believe you, so I'm leaving for the USA. Please bring up my son like a prince.

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Thanks a lot Mister Micawber.

"I believe you" sounds less strong of my belief. I wanted to put more emphasis on the amount of belief I have. How to say that?
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It is sufficiently 'strong' for this context. We do not express such strong emotions to other than close family and very close friends, and concerning only topics of great emotion or import. A bank deposit does not qualify.

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