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Nhhh25 Posted 4 years ago
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In fact, finances are the main factor in our life. However, I do not agree completely that people are too important to have a job with a high salary. To start with, most people in the world are choosing to have raised earnings in order to respond...

In fact, finances are the main factor in our life. However, I do not agree completely that people are too important to have a job with a high salary.


To start with, most people in the world are choosing to have raised earnings in order to respond to their needs. They often have the ability to pay their monthly bills like electricity, water, transportation costs without thinking instead of having a financial hunger. Whatmore the costs of goods depend on their nutritional level. if they have an opportunity of having a high-salary job, their life can be better than, health is guaranteed.


On the contrary, the salary is the most important consideration, I disagree. I believe that other reviews are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues cannot make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. In addition, if they just focus on high income, they will not reach their dream even just once. Because some dream jobs have a low price, or some of them are high payment, it takes a lot of money and effort. but not because of that they ignore it. If you try it, you will know how it suits you, and know how it is like to live with passion.


In conclusion, while salaries definitely affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.

  

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