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Andrei Posted 22 years ago
Grammar

In earnest

1) I request you to attend my letter as soon as possible, in earnest.

2) I request you to attend my letter as soon as possible in earnest.

3) I request you, in earnest, to attend my letter as soon as possible.


The context for the above is a letter sent by a client requesting about one of our products. My question is the placing of the words in earnest. Which is the correct?

Your thoughts please.
  

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Hello, Andrei The different positions of "in earnest" may change the meaning of the sentence. ", without "to". Also, "attend to my letter"; not "attend my letter".

  • Hello, Andrei The different positions of "in earnest" may change the meaning of the sentence.
  • ", without "to".
  • Also, "attend to my letter"; not "attend my letter".
  • Attend means 'to be present at' or 'to go to' when it is not followed by "to".
  • Sentences #1 and #2 seem to be similar.
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Hello, Andrei Emotion: smile

The different positions of "in earnest" may change the meaning of the sentence.

First of all, the
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Miriam

Thanks for the reply. It was a stupid mistake by me to write 'attend my letter'. It should be 'attend to my letter'.

Attend to something or someone means give some careful thoughts.

Well, I hope the others will comment too. I am a bit perplexed by your interpretation of the three sentences.
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I see two ways of writing this sentence that would be grammatically and stylistically acceptable:

1. I request, in earnest, that you attend to my letter as soon as possible.
2. I request that you attend to my letter as soon as possible, and in earnest.

[1] and [2] have slightly different meanings. In [1], it is the client who is earnest (in making this request). In [2],
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Dave,
I don't think I've come across "in earnest" more than a couple of times in my life.
Why do you say it's "silly"? Is it an old-fashioned expression? Does it sound a bit too pompous?

Thank you.

Miriam

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