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Anonymous Posted 21 years ago
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in certain aspects

Hello!

Can you please read this sentence and see if it is OK. I'm especially interested in higlighted parts.Thank you

If we summarize everything previously said with a certain amount of self-criticism, we can conclude that the existing negotiating business practice as well as the systems of its support are inadequate in certain aspects concerning complexity and demands of contemporary business making.

  

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The sentence is awkward. If we critically examine everything previously said, we can conclude that the existing negotiation practices and their support systems are inadequate to the complexity and demands of contemporary business operations.

— Mister Micawber

  • The sentence is awkward.
  • If we critically examine everything previously said, we can conclude that the existing negotiation practices and their support systems are inadequate to the complexity and demands of contemporary business operations.
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The sentence is awkward.

If we critically examine everything previously said, we can conclude that the existing negotiation practices and their support systems are inadequate to the complexity and demands of contemporary business operations.

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Thanks MM.

so, you got rid of in certain aspects? Can I perhaps replace it with somewhat inadequate. Is it OK?
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I think it is logically unnecessary. Inadequate is not adequate.
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I think I'd have gotten rid of "in certain aspects" too, or else, I'd have listed the aspects I'm refering to. What do you think?
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It makes sense, thank you
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