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Kilimanjaro Posted 18 years ago
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in as nail biting of a place as it had ever closed a season

"Nearly nine months ago Lost closed its third season in as nail biting of a place as it had ever closed a season."

I need a paraphrase of the sentence, especially the highlighted part. Thanks.
  

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" I need a paraphrase of the sentence, especially the highlighted part. Thanks. As written, there are several problems with this sentence.

  • " I need a paraphrase of the sentence, especially the highlighted part.
  • Thanks.
  • As written, there are several problems with this sentence.
  • " Even corrected, it's still a cumbersome sentence.
  • Here's how I'd reword it.
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Hi,



"Nearly nine months ago Lost closed its third season in as nail biting of a place as it had ever closed a season."

I need a paraphrase of the sentence, especially the highlighted part. Thanks.

As written, there are several problems with this sentence. I'd say

"Nearly nine months ago, Lost closed its third seas

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