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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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In article, the 3 sentences seems wrong
in article, the 3 sentences seems wron, what do you think?
http://www.highstakesdb.com/2871-isildur1-leads-superstar-showdown-as-match-is-postponed.aspx
Isildur1 will have been very keen to avenge the only defeat to his name so far in the Superstar Showdown serie.
According to Haxton there had been a big storm two days ago in Malta, where he is currently residing, since when his internet connection has been very unstable.
Apparently, next weeks Showdown opponent Alex “http://www.highstakesdb.com/profiles/pokerstars/Kanu7.aspx” Millar had offered to play Isildur for a period while Haxton sorted out his connection but as it looked increasingly unlikely Haxton would be able to return to the tables today PokerStars decided it would be better all round to postpone the match.
http://www.highstakesdb.com/2871-isildur1-leads-superstar-showdown-as-match-is-postponed.aspx
Isildur1 will have been very keen to avenge the only defeat to his name so far in the Superstar Showdown serie.
According to Haxton there had been a big storm two days ago in Malta, where he is currently residing, since when his internet connection has been very unstable.
Apparently, next weeks Showdown opponent Alex “http://www.highstakesdb.com/profiles/pokerstars/Kanu7.aspx” Millar had offered to play Isildur for a period while Haxton sorted out his connection but as it looked increasingly unlikely Haxton would be able to return to the tables today PokerStars decided it would be better all round to postpone the match.
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I see only a missing apostrophe in "week's", and the same sentence could use a couple of commas. Other than that, they are OK. What glaring errors do you think you see?
- I see only a missing apostrophe in "week's", and the same sentence could use a couple of commas.
- Other than that, they are OK.
- What glaring errors do you think you see?
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I see only a missing apostrophe in "week's", and the same sentence could use a couple of commas. Other than that, they are OK. What glaring errors do you think you see?
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