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In a globalized economy

If you see any mistakes, please correct me.

Today, in a globalized economy, one country's economic failure could cause global economic crisis. The global economic crisis in 200, which emerged as a financial crisis in the U.S is one example of it.
  

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" In punctuating "US," use either two periods or none. What do you mean by "the crisis in 200"? " The rest seems okay.

  • " In punctuating "US," use either two periods or none.
  • What do you mean by "the crisis in 200"?
  • " The rest seems okay.
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If you're setting off the "which" clause, I suggest a comma after "U.S."

In punctuating "US," use either two periods or none.

What do you mean by "the crisis in 200"?

I'd probably say "one example of this."

The rest seems okay.

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