Improvisation
Could anyone improve the style of this sentence please and also correct any grammatical mistakes if any-
Even after committing such a huge blunder, because of which the world has faced serious consequences. China is still running some wet markets.
China is still running some wet markets, even after committing such a huge blunder because of which the world has faced serious consequences.
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too finicky 7 Even after committing such a huge blunder, because of which the world has faced serious consequences. You end this part with a period, as if it were a sentence. It's not a complete sentence.
- too finicky 7 Even after committing such a huge blunder, because of which the world has faced serious consequences.
- You end this part with a period, as if it were a sentence.
- It's not a complete sentence.
- It's like saying "After that happened" and stopping.
- The reader wants to know what comes next.
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too finicky 7Even after committing such a huge blunder, because of which the world has faced serious consequences.
You end this part with a period, as if it were a sentence. It's not a complete sentence. It's like saying "After that happened" and stopping. The reader wants to know what comes next.
Use a comma, not a period.
Even after comm
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