Improving this sentence's structure
My friend made a cake,I liked it, but I dont wanna simply say: It is a good cake,its too humdrum,too simple,I wanna a better structure so I was thinking : It came out good ,It went out good ,It got good,It stayed good(this last two are literal translations from my native language,dont know if in this case they are acceptable).So are my options grammatically correct ?
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When you post here, use the best English you can. Wanna is not a valid word. You used commas rather than periods (full stops).
- When you post here, use the best English you can.
- Wanna is not a valid word.
- You used commas rather than periods (full stops).
- You missed other punctuation marks, like the apostrophe.
- That was a delicious cake.
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When you post here, use the best English you can.
Wanna is not a valid word.
You used commas rather than periods (full stops).
You missed other punctuation marks, like the apostrophe.
That was a delicious cake. It was perfectly baked and very moist, not dry. May I have your recipe?
0dominique 4595 It came out good.It went out good. It got good. It stayed good.
It came out good or It came out well are possible. Not the others.
But if you really want to get away from humdrum, you'll need something even more interesting than those.
It's fantastic! / It's wonderful! / I've never tasted anything so
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