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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Business & Finance

Improving PowerPoint presentation conclusion

Hi guys,

I am preparing a business power-point presentation and would like someone to help me out in better phrasing the following as I feel the conclusion needs to be really impactful. Can anybuddy help me out.

"The purpose of pointing the aforementioned issues is not to be excessively critical or malign some businesses but only intent is to present to you the true state of affairs and serious short-comings experienced as an employee when the stakes are as high representing the best companies in the world.

We feel that we can be a better partner in your sales pursuits given our all round knowledge and experience."

Best regards,
B Singh
  

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The purpose of pointing the aforementioned issues out is not to be excessively critical or to malign some businesses. The sole intent is to present you with the true state of affairs and serious short-comings an employee experiences when the stakes are so high, representing the best companies in the world. "

  • The purpose of pointing the aforementioned issues out is not to be excessively critical or to malign some businesses.
  • The sole intent is to present you with the true state of affairs and serious short-comings an employee experiences when the stakes are so high, representing the best companies in the world.
  • "
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The purpose of pointing the aforementioned issues out is not to be excessively critical or to malign some businesses. The sole intent is to present you with the true state of affairs and serious short-comings an employee experiences when the stakes are so high, representing the best companies in the world.

We feel that we can be a better partner

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