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Goldenboy1 Posted 8 years ago
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Improving my writing skills

I have been working on my writing skills to improve myself. Could please read through my report and advise if the content is clear? Also, your suggestions are highly appreciated.


I have instructed our contractor to investigate the noise on the second floor. Unfortunately, he cannot locate where the noise is coming from, but I have informed my manager but says will instruct another company to attend on Tuesday to conduct a thorough investigation, I will update you immediately after.

  

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Here are some edits for you to consider. To avoid a lot of errors, try not to write very long sentences. I have instructed our contractor to investigate the noise on the second floor.

  • Here are some edits for you to consider.
  • To avoid a lot of errors, try not to write very long sentences.
  • I have instructed our contractor to investigate the noise on the second floor.
  • Unfortunately, he cannot locate where the noise is coming from .
  • period but I have informed my manager , who but says that he will instruct another company to attend on Tuesday to conduct a thorough investigation, I will update you immediately afterwards.
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Here are some edits for you to consider. To avoid a lot of errors, try not to write very long sentences.


I have instructed our contractor to investigate the noise on the second floor. Unfortunately, he cannot locate where the noise is coming from. period but I have informed my manager, who but says that he

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