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Xi wu Posted 14 years ago
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Improvement for slogan
I have wrote a slogan of "Excellent project, Best service, People Orientation, Environment protection, Continuous improvement, Aim hig", is this a proper description?
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It seems a bit lengthy as a slogan. ] An improvement on what you have, however, would be to use parallel structures in all the phrases. Aim hig h .
- It seems a bit lengthy as a slogan.
- ] An improvement on what you have, however, would be to use parallel structures in all the phrases.
- Aim hig h .
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It seems a bit lengthy as a slogan. [I'm not a PR person, so I could be entirely wrong.]
An improvement on what you have, however, would be to use parallel structures in all the phrases.
Aim high.
An improvement on what you have, however, would be to use parallel structures in all the phrases.
Aim high.
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