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Mr. Tom Posted 8 years ago
Vocabulary

Improve your personality

Hi

Is this dialogue natural English? Any suggestions please?

(Director and actress)

D = Surely you have a lot of talent, but...

A = But?

D = Please don't mind, but I think you need to improve your personality a bit.

A = My personality?

D = See in Showbiz, it's really important how you walk and talk and what you wear.

Thanks,

Tom

  

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Is this dialogue natural English? Any suggestions please? (Director and actress) D = Sure you have a lot of talent, but...

— Clive

  • Is this dialogue natural English?
  • Any suggestions please?
  • (Director and actress) D = Sure you have a lot of talent, but...
  • A = But?
  • D = Please don't get upset , but I think you need to improve your personality a bit.
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Is this dialogue natural English? Any suggestions please?

(Director and actress)

D = Sure you have a lot of talent, but...

A = But?

D = Please don't get upset, but I think you need to improve your personality a bit.

A = My personality?

D = See comma in showbiz no comma it's really important how you walk and talk and

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