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Tscalasal Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Improve sentence. Help :)
I would like to improve that sentence. It does sound wrong when I read it. Anybody? Thanks in advance. Cheers!
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"The Law also comprises natural gas, notwithstanding the fact that the Law is called Petroleum Law.
Furthermore, comparative law analysis was a great contribution to the approved law; as an object of comparison, among others, such countries as Brazil, Norway and Angola were valuable legal resource tools."
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"The Law also comprises natural gas, notwithstanding the fact that the Law is called Petroleum Law.
Furthermore, comparative law analysis was a great contribution to the approved law; as an object of comparison, among others, such countries as Brazil, Norway and Angola were valuable legal resource tools."
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The law also covers natural gas, although it is called the Petroleum Law. Comparative legal analysis was a great contribution to the approved law ; the legislation of such countries as Brazil, Norway and Angola was valuable for comparison.
- The law also covers natural gas, although it is called the Petroleum Law.
- Comparative legal analysis was a great contribution to the approved law ; the legislation of such countries as Brazil, Norway and Angola was valuable for comparison.
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The law also covers natural gas, although it is called the Petroleum Law. Comparative legal analysis was a great contribution to the approved law; the legislation of such countries as Brazil, Norway and Angola was valuable for comparison.
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