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Tony.Fer Posted 17 years ago
Vocabulary

Improve sentence

Dear Friends,.

'Lately, I got an enticing job offer, better salary, along with more benefits. Spurred on by this, i've chosen to leave my current and take up the new one'

I know its not good one. how can I improve it.

Thanks!!
  

Top answer

I received an enticing job offer recently. The pay's better along with some fringe benefits. Inspired by all of the above, I've decided to quit my current job and take on the new one.

— Madhulk

  • I received an enticing job offer recently.
  • The pay's better along with some fringe benefits.
  • Inspired by all of the above, I've decided to quit my current job and take on the new one.
  • Hope this hepls.
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I received an enticing job offer recently.
The pay's better along with some fringe benefits.
Inspired by all of the above, I've decided to quit my current job
and take on the new one.
Hope this hepls.
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ANYWAY, 'SPURRED ON BY THIS' DOES NOT MATCH HERE?
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I think you can apply it as well.
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