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Tony.Fer Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Improve sentence

Dear Friends,.

'Lately, I got an enticing job offer, better salary, along with more benefits. Spurred on by this, i've chosen to leave my current and take up the new one'

I know its not good one. how can I improve it.

Thanks!!
  

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Recently I got an enticing job offer offering a better salary and more benefits , so I've chosen to leave my current position and take this new one.

  • Recently I got an enticing job offer offering a better salary and more benefits , so I've chosen to leave my current position and take this new one.
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Recently I got an enticing job offer offering a better salary and more benefits, so I've chosen to leave my current position and take this new one.

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