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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Writing Shelter, the space of cultivating writing skills for the young, is filled with our numerous dreams.
We’re thinking of the effective guide for everyone longing for to taking up their writing seriously, with any objective.
Carefully, cautiously, and particularly editing, we divide problems into small pieces which were shown in very clear and simple ways to follow and practice.

Three weighty matters in writing which we focus on to support the young are (1) psychological problems when starting to write, (2) Establishing a sustainable habit of writing and (3) Nurturing mind and soul for writing.

The idea of Writing Shelter came to me when I was in high school. I knew writing is my grand passion, however, the writing classes do not provide me any motivation. At that time, I just wished I had been accepted to write everything attracted or inspired me.

I found from my own that at first writing is a so private process so that it should come from “the true us”. We needn’t do anything but writing exactly what we’re feeling, what we’re thinking, what matters us. Writing is literally a self-reflection, a self-exploration. Secondly, children should be learned to write meaningful sentence, logical paragraph before they become young adults. Through the writing process, eventually, they should be learned how to establish their independent perspectives.

  

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Writing Shelter, the space of cultivating writing skills for the young, is filled with our numerous dreams. I don't understand what you mean. Sleep can be filled with dreams.

  • Writing Shelter, the space of cultivating writing skills for the young, is filled with our numerous dreams.
  • I don't understand what you mean.
  • Sleep can be filled with dreams.
  • ) longing for to take up their writing seriously, with any objective.
  • ) we divide problems into small pieces which were (?
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Writing Shelter, the space of cultivating writing skills for the young, is filled with our numerous dreams.

I don't understand what you mean. Sleep can be filled with dreams.


We’re thinking of an effective guide for everyone (Contradicts the previous sentence, where you say it's for the

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