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BW2/3 Posted 20 years ago
Grammar

imposes

She imposes whatever she thinks which is right on me.

She imposes whatever, she thinks, is right on me.

Are they OK?

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Lose the "which" and maybe replace "on" with "upon". The "is" is optional. Purely as a matter of style, I would not put the clause "whatever she thinks right" in that location.

  • Lose the "which" and maybe replace "on" with "upon".
  • The "is" is optional.
  • Purely as a matter of style, I would not put the clause "whatever she thinks right" in that location.
  • She imposes whatever she thinks [is] right upon me.
  • or Whatever she thinks is right, she imposes upon me.
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Lose the "which" and maybe replace "on" with "upon". The "is" is optional. Purely as a matter of style, I would not put the clause "whatever she thinks right" in that location.

She imposes whatever she thinks [is] right upon me.

or

Whatever she thinks is right, she imposes upon me.

She imposes upon me whatever she thinks right. (However, I guess this order c
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This is how it splits:

She imposes / whatever she thinks is right / on me.

thus your commas aren't in the right places.

The first seems OK to me.
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The two options that BW2/3 and Anonymous posted are equal (once grammar is fixed, so I am basically referring to comma or no comma and ordering), but they merely differ in what you want to emphasize.

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