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Anonymous Posted 18 years ago
Letter Writing

important email

Hello guys, I need your help. I'm going to send an email to the dean of the University and I want to make very nice email. English is my second language, so some time I make a lot of mistake. Anyway, here is the email:

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Hi Dr

I am . I met Cindy on Friday regarding to my score at the GMAT test and she recommended me to meet you. So, I would like to meet you on next Tuesday.
Thank you,
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Is there any mistake , or is there anyway to make better email?

Thanks again

  

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Universities do not have deans; university schools and departments have deans, while the university itself has a president. Dear Dr [ surname ] , My name is [ full name ], and I am a second-year student in the Department of Economics . I met Cindy [ surname ], [job title, office name] on Friday, [ date ], regarding my GMAT score , and she recommended that I consult you.

  • Universities do not have deans; university schools and departments have deans, while the university itself has a president.
  • Dear Dr [ surname ] , My name is [ full name ], and I am a second-year student in the Department of Economics .
  • I met Cindy [ surname ], [job title, office name] on Friday, [ date ], regarding my GMAT score , and she recommended that I consult you.
  • Would it be possible for me to make an appointment with you in order to discuss my GMAT scores?
  • I am currently free on these days and times: [ give the Dean a choice of several days and times ].
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Universities do not have deans; university schools and departments have deans, while the university itself has a president.

Dear Dr [surname],

My name is [full name], and I am a second-year student in the Department of Economics. I met Cindy [surname], [job title, office name] on Friday, [date], rega

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