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Stevenukd Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
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Dear Teachers!
- Please correct the sentences below if you find any mistakes
1. You have success when you can choose the right in the wrong, when you have attributtions for the world around you, and you appreciate things which are really important, such as family and friends.
2. While other people think that famous athletes, actresses, actors, musicians are good types and good examples, then my Mom was really my inspiration, and she was still my inspiration later years. My Mom taught me that dilligence never kill anybody. My Mom was really my heroine. My Mom, my family and my friends brought me more happinesses than anything else in life.
3. At the end of my life, I don't want other people to think about me like a man who just likes doing nothing and say " I did it!". I don't want to broast/brag that I tried my best for my career, because there were some days I didn't feel like working hard at all. But anyway I tried my best, because that's my true nature/substance.
- Thanks very much to Teachers.
Stevenukd.
- Please correct the sentences below if you find any mistakes
1. You have success when you can choose the right in the wrong, when you have attributtions for the world around you, and you appreciate things which are really important, such as family and friends.
2. While other people think that famous athletes, actresses, actors, musicians are good types and good examples, then my Mom was really my inspiration, and she was still my inspiration later years. My Mom taught me that dilligence never kill anybody. My Mom was really my heroine. My Mom, my family and my friends brought me more happinesses than anything else in life.
3. At the end of my life, I don't want other people to think about me like a man who just likes doing nothing and say " I did it!". I don't want to broast/brag that I tried my best for my career, because there were some days I didn't feel like working hard at all. But anyway I tried my best, because that's my true nature/substance.
- Thanks very much to Teachers.
Stevenukd.
Top answer
Hi Stevenukd, I'll try my bid. 1. You can be succesful when you know to distinguish the right from the wrong , when you have attributtions for the world around you , and when you can appreciate things which are really important, such as family and friends.
- Hi Stevenukd, I'll try my bid.
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- You can be succesful when you know to distinguish the right from the wrong , when you have attributtions for the world around you , and when you can appreciate things which are really important, such as family and friends.
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- While most people think that famous athletes, actresses, actors, musicians make good icons, for me, my mom is my real source of inspiration, and she has always been my inspiration throughout the years .
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Hi Stevenukd,
I'll try my bid.
1. You can be succesful when you know to distinguish the righ
I'll try my bid.
1. You can be succesful when you know to distinguish the righ
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You might want to consider these changes. (I don't know if I correctly understood every point made in nos.1 and 3.
1. You are successful when you can distinguish right from wrong, when you make a contribution to the world around you, and when you appreciate the things that are really important, such as family and friends.
2. While some people think that fam
1. You are successful when you can distinguish right from wrong, when you make a contribution to the world around you, and when you appreciate the things that are really important, such as family and friends.
2. While some people think that fam
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