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Sailsofoblivion Posted 11 years ago
Vocabulary
Image Clash
Someone on here kindly pointed out that my use of images in this sentence, clashed as it's a bit weird to personify instruments and then describe them as tools. Would the use of "being" work as a good solution to this problem? I
Original: "There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life, and used as tools to create music."
Potential Solution: "There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life, being used as tools to create music."
Original: "There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life, and used as tools to create music."
Potential Solution: "There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life, being used as tools to create music."
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You could always go around this problem and exclude "tools" from your sentence. There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life and used to create music.
- You could always go around this problem and exclude "tools" from your sentence.
- There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life and used to create music.
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You could always go around this problem and exclude "tools" from your sentence.
There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life and used to create music.
There was something magical, I thought, in the way that instruments could be brought to life and used to create music.
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