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CharmYou Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

I'm writing a poem.

Thanks for everything,
that had happened,
that has happened,
that happened,
that happens,
that would happen,
that will happen,
and that will have happened.

Am I a good writer? Haa...Does my poem make sense?
  

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You are kidding, right ? I don't know what others will call it, but that is no poem.

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You are kidding, right ? I don't know what others will call it, but that is no poem.
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Yes . but isn't it like a poem?
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Hi

One problem is that is doesn't quite scan - it lacks a natural rhythm.

Thanks for everything that happened
That has happened; that happened
That happens and would happen,
The things that will happen and will have happened.

Here's part of a famous poem ...

Time present and time past
Are both perhaps present in time future
And time future
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You are a good writter..I was joking..
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That's cool. I was just jamming too

Dave
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