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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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I'm writing a movie review can tell me if this correct?
I'm writing a review about a movie, and I've reread it and the following sentences stand out, not sure they arer correct.
1.The first half of the movie, she's a little girl and then it goes forward 20 years, see her as an adult.
2.There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as plan. For example; you have to rely on him forgetting to lock the door so that you can get in. The movie is unrealstic in that regard.
3.At the end of the movie there is a scene involving a man and his dilemma.
4."That's how you'll end up if you don't find yourself a job"with a condescending tone he says.
5.The fight scenes in the movie are shot at 2x the normal speed. The director did that for effect.
The help would be greatly taken
1.The first half of the movie, she's a little girl and then it goes forward 20 years, see her as an adult.
2.There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as plan. For example; you have to rely on him forgetting to lock the door so that you can get in. The movie is unrealstic in that regard.
3.At the end of the movie there is a scene involving a man and his dilemma.
4."That's how you'll end up if you don't find yourself a job"with a condescending tone he says.
5.The fight scenes in the movie are shot at 2x the normal speed. The director did that for effect.
The help would be greatly taken
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1. In the first half of the movie, she is a little girl , and then it moves forward 20 years , and we see her as an adult. There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as planned .
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- In the first half of the movie, she is a little girl , and then it moves forward 20 years , and we see her as an adult.
- There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as planned .
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- The movie is unrealistic in that regard.
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1. In the first half of the movie, she is a little girl, and then it moves forward 20 years, and we see her as an adult.
2.There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as planned. For example, they (?) have to rely on his forgetting
2.There are exterior factors that have to fall into place for the plan to go as planned. For example, they (?) have to rely on his forgetting
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