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Kimkim8450 Posted 10 years ago
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I'm trying to translate a paragraph from my language to english, could you check if the bold sentence is okay? Thank you!

The reason why I’m going to Law school is to complete my father’s unfulfilled dream when he was alive. My father wanted to attend Law school but at that time my grandparents were too poor to afford my father’s dream school. After spending one year here I started to like Law school. Although my first year result didn’t reach my expectation and sometime I feel so discouraged that I want to give up, it's the memories of my father and the love for my hardworking mother that helps me to carry on. In this second year, I hope that my result would be better so my mother wouldn’t have to worry about me anymore.
  

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The reason why I’m going to la w school is to complete fulfill my late father’s unfulfilled drea m. when he was alive. My father wanted to attend la w schoo l, but at that tim e, my grandparents were too poor to afford the fees.

— Teechr

  • The reason why I’m going to la w school is to complete fulfill my late father’s unfulfilled drea m.
  • when he was alive.
  • My father wanted to attend la w schoo l, but at that tim e, my grandparents were too poor to afford the fees.
  • my father’s dream school.
  • After spending one year her e, I started to really like studying l a w.
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The reason why I’m going to law school is to complete fulfill my late father’s unfulfilled dream. when he was alive. My father wanted to attend law school, but at that time, my grandparents were too poor to afford the fees. my father’s dream school. After spending one year here, I starte
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Thank you a lot, teechr Emotion: embarrassed
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In this second year, I hope that I can get better grades so my mother won't have to worry about me anymore.
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