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Janusz Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Im traing preper my visit card in english

"The optimisation of fodder and the sale of fodder components for poultry farms"
"Feeding advisory and distributions of fodder components for poultry"
Is this sentences corect?
Thanks in advance for your help.
  

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These aren't complete sentences. Once there is a complete sentence, I'd be more than happy to help you!

  • These aren't complete sentences.
  • Once there is a complete sentence, I'd be more than happy to help you!
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These aren't complete sentences. Once there is a complete sentence, I'd be more than happy to help you!
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Hi,

Have you considerd saying something simple and direct?

eg

Fred Smith

Fodder for Poultry Farms

or eg

Fred Smith

Fodder Systems for Poultry Farms

Best wishes, Clive

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