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Lee Jones Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Im teaching my self to wright,
this a test to wright a fight scene using microsoft word
just wondering if its any good
The rain, is falling hard sounds almost like drums, hitting the road.
Jason, is fighting with Ted, his left arm is swinging towards Teds, right arm. Missing Ted, completely Ted “is about to do an uppercut” Which connects, With Jason, chin. Blood,splatters over the wall. And Jason falls to the ground.
just wondering if its any good
The rain, is falling hard sounds almost like drums, hitting the road.
Jason, is fighting with Ted, his left arm is swinging towards Teds, right arm. Missing Ted, completely Ted “is about to do an uppercut” Which connects, With Jason, chin. Blood,splatters over the wall. And Jason falls to the ground.
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" The writing is very choppy, and the commas are mostly misplaced. That makes it very hard to read and understand. You might try something more like this, although I've done no screenwriting, and don't know exactly how it is formatted.
- " The writing is very choppy, and the commas are mostly misplaced.
- That makes it very hard to read and understand.
- You might try something more like this, although I've done no screenwriting, and don't know exactly how it is formatted.
- Scene: Hard rain is falling on the road, making a sound almost like drums.
- Jason is fighting with Ted.
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In this context, the word you want is "write," not "wright."
The writing is very choppy, and the commas are mostly misplaced. That makes it very hard to read and understand.
You might try something more like this, although I've done no screenwriting, and don't know exactly how it is formatted.
Scene: Hard rain is falling on the road, making a sound almost like drums.
The writing is very choppy, and the commas are mostly misplaced. That makes it very hard to read and understand.
You might try something more like this, although I've done no screenwriting, and don't know exactly how it is formatted.
Scene: Hard rain is falling on the road, making a sound almost like drums.
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Ok i have just started realy i try put commas by names, places, and objects,
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Lee JonesOk i have just started realy i try put commas by names, places, and objects,Commas have many functions, but they don't go after every noun.
Take a look here: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/o
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You do not need commas after names in all situations. You do place them after a name in a sentence such as the following:
Lee, did you do your homework?
but not in a sentence such as this:
Lee did his homework.
You put commas after a place in a sentence such as the following:
John lived in Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, where he was born and raised.
Lee, did you do your homework?
but not in a sentence such as this:
Lee did his homework.
You put commas after a place in a sentence such as the following:
John lived in Oklahoma City, Oklahoma, where he was born and raised.
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