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DESCRIBE AN EDUCATIONAL GOAL AND EXPLAIN WHAT YOU NEED TO DO TO ACHIEVE IT

Educational is really important and necessary for everyone, because whoever want to achieve their dream, they have to study and learn by their best to get more and more knowledge. For me, during my learning journey, i set several goal whenever i have a task or come up to a new grade, but above all, my first and biggest educational goal is become a well-known around the world and business woman. FIRSTLY to accomplish my dream, i have to study hard, get a high score and rank in my primary, secondary, high school or even till university. Someone probably think that score is not important, but to me, it has somewhat appreciated of your efforts and what you get during this process. One small secret is that persistence can made everything impossible become possible, you believe what you do, you will succeed. In addition to it, the SECOND thing i have to do is to be fearless. Someone who daydreams about a big company, a huge business with highest revenue in their country but they just watch the clock tick in their office or even about worried about their paycheck. If you want to succeed, you have to overcome and learn how to manage your own fears, and then come out of your crowd, set up a new, fresh, intelligent your own business. One who can fail miserably and not be scared to dust themselves off and try again and again until they are successful is truly fearless. And FINALLY, in my capacity as a owner business, I definitely have to have good qualifications, skills and above them, I have to identify I am a leader, a founder with intelligent and lucid. As we'll discuss shortly, your ultimate success will have a lot to do with how you help others find their own. Many of us hold successful entrepreneurs on a pedestal much like football fans hold a star quarterback or wide receiver in high regard. However, there's always a team that these individuals lead that ultimately leads to their success. You must learn how to be a leader on some kind of level in order to motivate others to join you in your venture, believe in what you preach, or give you money for a product or service that you offer. Therefore, i know i have to try by all my passion, my persistence day by day undoubtedly gives me a good result.