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The topic:

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

What sort of punishment should parent and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

My essey:

There is no doubt on the importance of teaching the difference of good and aspects young children's behavior to themselves. I partly agree with some kind of punishment are applied by parents and teachers.

Breaking the laws are the most important thing in society which needs the root solution and making culture among people. Hence, the youngster must understand each mistake they make, either in home or school as the first society take part in it, has its own punishments. Nevertheless, their good actions also must be considered by their adults, either parents or teachers, to be recognized the distinction of both sides and its effects by them. On the other hand, the amount of punishment and the ways of applying it are the crucial issues which require the profound investigation because the UNICEF institute
(the international organization supports the rights of children in all of the world) fights against any kind of violence towards children.

While, in developing countries, the corporal punishment has been used yet, experts in developed countries have searched toward the best method to teach children right and wrong aspects of their behavior. I personally believe in the second way why the first type of punishment could end to reverse influences like more violence and crime among young children or even mental disease. Parents and teachers are the most effective trainer for the youth in early age so they must avoid from any violent acts either physical or mental towards them insist of it they should use some alternatives. For example, restrict their access to some of their affairs like less time of playing game or TV in home or like a manager of primary school in the USA arrange some yoga classes for all of students in school insist of punishing some of them who had bad behavior.

In conclusion, as good and bad aspects of all things are known at early age, the reaction which be shown to these behaviors would be vital in the youth's life.