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Peimoku Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

I'm not sure what's the mistake...

Hi,I'm Satomi.

Could you check my aon's essay bellow? I don't know why this is wrong.


".....because we can reduce the trash be thrown away. And the trush recycled can become another thing. ........."


That part ,his teacher wrote "wrong", but no answer for it.

Please give us advice!

  

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anonymous I'm Satomi. Hi, Satomi. because we can reduce the trash be thrown away.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous I'm Satomi.
  • Hi, Satomi.
  • because we can reduce the trash be thrown away.
  • And the trush recycled can become another thing.
  • because we can reduce the trash to be thrown awa y, and the recycled trash can become something else .
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anonymousI'm Satomi.

Hi, Satomi.

anonymous I don't know why this is wrong.".....because we can reduce the trash be thrown away. And the trush recycled can become another thing. .

This is the correction:

...because we can reduce the trash to be thrown awa

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Peimoku....because we can reduce the trash be thrown away. And the trush recycled can become another thing. ........."

....because we can reduce the amount of trash going into landfills. And the trush recycled trash can be made into other things. ........."

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