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The higher up you live in a building the hotter it is. The law stands true until you get the thinner parts of the atmosphere such as the peaks of mountains or in the clouds where airplanes fly their course where it's the exact opposite; it is freezing cold.
Can you tell me what to correct?
The higher up you live in a building the hotter it is. The law stands true until you get the thinner parts of the atmosphere such as the peaks of mountains or in the clouds where airplanes fly their course where it's the exact opposite; it is freezing cold.
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The higher up you live in a building , the hotter it is. This law holds true until you get the thinner parts of the atmosphere , such as the peaks of mountains or in the clouds where airplanes fly their course , where it's the exact opposite; it is freezing cold. Not bad.
- The higher up you live in a building , the hotter it is.
- This law holds true until you get the thinner parts of the atmosphere , such as the peaks of mountains or in the clouds where airplanes fly their course , where it's the exact opposite; it is freezing cold.
- Not bad.
- I removed "their course" because it sounds a bit poetical.
- You can put it back if that's what you want.
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The higher up you live in a building, the hotter it is. This law holds true until you get the thinner parts of the atmosphere, such as the peaks of mountains or in the clouds where airplanes fly their course
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